So after spending quite a while trying to name a character I wanted in the story and getting nowhere, I decided to just remove her and continue anyway. This story needs to be free dammit! I've started writing up chapter two properly now so expect updates eventually.

Side note. I want to find out names of shades of grey. But I know typing shades of grey into google images won't result in what I want.

This covers chapters eight of the book, which equates to eight and nine of Fifty Shades, and I've also provided a bit about Grey, which is Fifty Shades written from Christian Grey's point of view. If you haven't read it and will never read it for any one of a number of excellent reasons, you can hear it from me that it is one of the laziest things I've ever seen. It can't have been for anything other than the money, unless perhaps it's a sort of backhanded attempt at a

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I mentioned in my previous post that I've been reviewing Fifty Shades of Neigh, which is a parody of Fifty Shades of Grey. The hero, Crispian Neigh, has a dark secret. He's a Brony.

Anyway, the group that's hosting it, Rage Reviews, is marked NSFW, and some people might not be interested in going there or in the full review.

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Hope you're having fun!

I have a ton to do, but I just did a double update on Fifty Shades of Neigh in Rage Reviews. Remember, it's a NSFW group now, and there are trigger warnings for rape, violence, and sexual abuse. So I'm not providing a link--it's just that some people like to know.

Is it bad that I like this? I mean how is it any morally better than 50 shades of grey?

- Old Klingon Proverb

This comment came up in one of the recent chapters of my story Obedience is Magic. Recent in terms of chapter order, if not chronologically.

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I hope your day is less boring than usual. Cause girl you're perfect! You're always worth it, and you deserve it the way you work it! Cause girl you earned it!